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Sample IELTS Writing Task 2: Teach children to have a healthy diet

Đề bài

Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Sample

Promoting excellent health is critical for a child’s overall well-being. Parents should educate their children on the value of eating a well-balanced diet at home. Meanwhile, others believe that the greatest place to learn this is at school. Throughout this essay, I would examine both of the offered statements before coming to a sensible conclusion.
There is no doubt that parents bear significant dietary and health-related obligations for their children. The first step is to eat healthy foods. To be specific, parents are responsible for ensuring that meals are nutritious and healthful because they are the ones who are in charge of. Subsequently, parents should advise their children to avoid sugary snacks and junk food during the day. Instead, they should establish a focus on what foods to avoid and present a range of foods with fruits and vegetables on a daily basis.
A school, on the other hand, has a lot to offer in terms of fostering a healthy lifestyle and a well-balanced diet. Health education has long been a part of the school curriculum, helping students understand the necessity of eating a balanced diet and forming good eating habits. In order to promote healthy behaviors, children are exposed to a number of health themes at school, including disease prevention, physical activity, and nutrition. They also have access to important tools and resources as part of the lesson. For example, at school, there are kitchen and food garden lessons that connect children to a robust lifestyle.
In conclusion, having considered both sides of the issues, I would agree that school is the ideal place to acquire good habits and proper eating, even though parents have the ultimate obligation to their children in terms of healthcare and a balanced diet. Having said that, parents should continue to encourage their children to make healthy eating choices.

Vocab


  • Dietary (adj): liên quan tới chế độ ăn uống
  • Nutritious (adj): giàu chất dinh dưỡng
  • Sugary snacks (n): các loại thực phẩm có hàm lượng đường cao
  • Foster (v): nuôi dưỡng, ươm mầm, cải thiện
  • Health themes: các hoạt động liên quan tới vấn đề sức khỏe
  • Robust (adj): (lối sống) lành mạnh, cân bằng
  • Ultimate (adj): tối ưu nhất, không cần bàn cãi

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